Our Group

Our group consists of four individuals: Ryan Howard, Max Levene, Georgina 'Didi' Finlay and Gabriella Kingsley. (The blog links are located on the right). We all developed the short story which we then called 'Smile', and then wrote a script. You can view all of our pre-production, production and post-production once they have been edited into our blogs.

Tuesday 21 December 2010

Trailer

I made this trailer using iMovie. This will go on our DVD Extras, and is a preview to the final, finished version of our film.
The trailer follows the conventions of a real movie trailer, by using music that fits in with our drama, titles, different shot lengths, shot sizes, a release date, the actors names, the directors, and also the roles of everyone else in the film's production.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DwLGxNLo55s




Another convention with this trailer is that we created our own distributor, 'Fine Art Films', parodying Paramount Pictures,

Sunday 28 November 2010

Poster Idea 2

As well as the smiley face idea, we also thought that we could have just the one main character, with words written on the board. As well as these describing words shown, there would also be the name of the film and the films director, producer and actors.
Below is a rough preview.

Thursday 18 November 2010

Pre-Production Video

For our group, we made a video of Gabbie and Didi talking about the different sheets we have produced, such as the production schedule, characters and their costumes, and we also filmed them talking about the location of the courtyard, classrooms and corridor. I edited the short clip on iMovie, then uploaded it onto my Youtube account. Using iMovie, I was able to add different titles, transitions, and other effects to our clip. As well as the locations and the printed sheets, I also added the music. One of the pieces of music that was put in was composed by Max, and will be used for Charlie's imagination scene, for when he imagins himself leaning in for a kiss with Gabriella. I also added the music which we might use for our montage scene. I have added both songs, so everyone can see which one is better, and which song would fit that part of the film. The music for that part was done by the artist, Shaheen. As well as Max and Shaheen's music, I also added the songs which our group might use for the second last scene, when we see Max preparing Charlie to go up to Gabriella, and Charlie is acting all cool, as well as dressing a bit more cool, unlike his geek outfit. The songs which go into consideration for this scene are by UnkleJam.

This is short clip that I edited and filmed, which shows all of our pre-production: (To view it bigger, click on the button on the bottom right)


These are the screen shots for when I was editing the short clip in iMovie:

All:
- This screenshot shows all of the iMovie application. You can see the video files at the bottom, and everything around it.

Selected Parts:
- Here, you can see which part of the video file I have used in the video. Where it has an orange line at the bottom, that shows it has been selected, and where there is no orange line, that shot has not been used.

Titles:
- This screenshot shows the options for selecting the titles. In iMovie, there are around 20 titles that you can change and edit.

Editing Titles:
- Once you have selected the title you want, you can then edit the size, colour, font and boldness etc.

Transitions:
- Similarly to the titles, you can choose from a range of pre-loaded transitions.

Music:
- When editing the short documentary style clip, I was able to add different songs and music. I created my own playlist in iTunes called 'Smile' which consists of all of the songs we might use in our 5 minute film. You can then drag it into your iMovie 'Project' so it fits in with a piece of video.

Sound Editing:
- Once you have put the music in place, you can change the volume of each of the different sound tracks. For example, in this video, I had to raise the volume of the dialogue because compared to the music, it was not that loud.

Music for imagination scene

Max created the music for Charlie's imagination scene, using Logic Pro. Max and Ryan had the idea that they wanted it to sound similar to Marvin Gaye's 'Sexual Healing'. It started of calm and mellow, but with a big climax half way through. The song consists of a total of 19 tracks, and instruments which include: harps, violins, pianos, horns, cellos and many more. Max added effects such as reverb, delay and and he edited the panning, EQ and velocity of each track. Max also dived deep into synthesis, editing the ADSR and envelopes. To create the soul feel drum kit, he used Ultrabeat, which is a drum beat sampler, making the kick and snare drum very soft with the high hats and symbols very crisp.

This is the full song:


Here are some screen shots of everything that has been explained above:

Full Screen:


Piano Roll:


Mixer:


Ultrabeat:


Instruments Used:

Thursday 11 November 2010

Location

This is the location we are using for our 5 minute film. The bench (in the photo) is the bench that Charlie and Max will have there lunch on, and the other bench is where Gabriella and Sophie will be sitting, outside the classroom. The corridor is where Charlie will walk through, towards Gabriella when he leans in for his imaginary kiss.



Thursday 4 November 2010

Film Poster Ideas

Between our group members we discussed ideas in how to create our poster. We came up with many different ideas that we couldn't agree on so we decided on mixing them together and came up with something we were all really liked.

Here is a sketch of our poster.

Background: White (Yellow Border)
Writing: Yellow (Black Outline)

The character at the top left is Gabriella and top right is Max. Both their bodies we plan to fade into the background. The character in the middle is Charlie. We plan to split him in half and fade it together to show his geek side (on the right) and to show his cool side (on the left).
We then had the title at the bottom in a curve, curving upwards.

We have placed all the characters and wording in particular places to create a smiley face. i.e. Max and Gabriella's heads being eyes, Charlie's being a nose, and Smile being the smiley mouth. It is similar to the image below.


Here are some examples of some famous Romantic Comedy posters. You can spot the similarity between them all. They all have white backgrounds, bold writing and a bright happy vibe to them.

Sunday 24 October 2010

Soundtrack

As well as Max doing some of the soundtrack, our group have managed to get copyright from two recording artists, Shaheen who was in the final of Britain's Got Talent, and a soul/funk group, UnkleJam. The songs from these artist's might be used in our montage sequence, but we are not yet sure on which one we are going to use.

Friday 22 October 2010

Production Roles

Prop/Sounds

1 - Ext. - Cycling to college
Sound FX of bicycle
Whistling "Lucky - Kylie Minogue"
Pink bicycle

2A - Int. - Classroom
Classroom Sounds
Pencil Case, Text Books

2B - Ext. - Outside classroom
Romantic music
Blackberry (Gabriella)
Starbucks Coffee (Gabriella/Sophie)

2A - Int. - Classroom

3 - Int. - Outside classrom
Common Room Sounds
Pen, paper
Blackberry's
Coffee
Half eaten muffin

4 - Ext.- Sitting in courtyard eating lunch
Tuppa Wear Lunch Box
Picnic Chocolate Bar
Carrot Sticks

5 - Int./Ext. - Montage
Music - Shaheen (Mircales/Hip Teens) or UnkleJam
Clothes , hats , shirts etc

6A - Ext. - Round the corner from school
New look props e.g Rocky
Blackberry, Watch
P. Diddy - Bad Boys

6B - Ext. - Outside classroom
Blackberry, watch, sunglasses

8 - Ext. - Charlie is inside class, Gabriella is outside
Text Books
Lunch box , Pencil Case

Costumes

There are three different costume changes for each character.



Production Meeting

We had a meeting in our lesson about which student is going to take up which roles. It is important that everyone learns about their own individual roles, and sticks to them. Those using Camera and Sound, will need a tutorial.


Ryan is now the director, while Gabriella is now producer.

Character Breakdown

Charlie:
- 16 boy
- From London
- Goes to college
- Nerdy/ geeky
- Nervous/ shy
- Has only one friend
- Has a crush on the popular girl
- Studies maths, chemistry and biology
- An only child living with his mum and dad
- Big imagination


Max:
- 16 year old boy
- Geeky, but not as geeky as his friend Charlie
- From London
- Goes to college
- Studies P.E, maths, English
- Lies about previous experiences
- Lives at home with mum, dad, older brother and younger sister

Gabriella:
- 16 years old
- From London
- Goes to same college as max and Charlie
- Most popular girl in school
- Charlie’s crush
- Confident but ditsy
- Has a best friend called Sophie
- Lives at home with just her Dad
- Studies P.E, Photography and Art


Sophie:
- Gabriella’s best friend
- Giggly
- From London
- 16
- Goes to same college
- Popular
- Almost Gabriella’s ‘side-kick’
- Studies P.E, Photography and Art
- Lives at home with both parents

Wednesday 20 October 2010

Audience Research

Our film, Smile, falls under the genre of romantic/teen comedy. Because of this it would therefore appeal to the age groups of 14-21, however I also feel that peopler older than that range would also enjoy our sort of film, because they could then imagine themselves in those situations, as they would know the feeling that the main character is feeling. Rom-coms generally appeal to the female gender, but males also tend to have a little soft side and enjoy watching them. We did a test in our class, with 90% of the students saying they regularly watch films of this genre.

Friday 15 October 2010

Storyboard


This is my first attempt at making a storyboard using the application Celtx. It is only of one scene, as I am going to do the rest of the storyboard using pen and paper, which will then make it much easier to modify.

Thursday 14 October 2010

Script - First Attempt

This is our first script. There are going to be many changes to it before we are happy with it and able to start the production.
To make our script, and to make it look professional, we used a piece of software called Celtx. Using this, helps us make a script which is so simple to follow and understand, and the software automatically put each piece of text into a different section (i.e. dialogue and character)

1. Ext.
Charlie is riding his bike in to college. Music in background. Cross cut to shots of Max Sitting in Starbucks waiting for Charlie to arrive.

2A. Int.
Max is sitting down in Starbucks next to the window. Charlie arrives and sits down.

Max:
About time
Charlie:
Sorry, was up late last night doing work, I'm shattered.
Max:
Did you see the new eppisode of Dr. Who last night?
Charlie:
No i didnt i missed it, i told you i had too much work! What happened?
Max:
It was amazing, Dr Who became friends with the evil guy but he didn't know he was evil, but the audience knew. So I was literally sitting there screaming at the television you don't understand I was getting so in to it! And then at the break, there was an advert for a Dr Who Live Show, I've already told my mum and she's booking us both tickets.

Max starts to describe lasts nights episode of Dr.Who, his voice starts to fade out and become a mumble as Charlie begins to stare at Gabriella and zone out.

2B. Ext.
Charlie Imagines himself getting up, marching outside, throwing his glasses, ripping open his shirt then grabbing Gabriella, dipping her and leaning in for a kiss. (Music "Just the two of us")

Cut


2A. Int.
Shot cuts to Charlie sitting back at the table in Starbucks with Max. Max slaps charlie.

Max:
Charlie wake up, your never gonna get a girl like that.
Charlie:
Sorry sorry I am listening! I need to go outside tho and get some fresh air.

Charlie and Max walk outside Starbucks and sit on the ledge.

3. Ext.
Max and Charlie begin to over hear Gabriella and Sophie's conversation. Charlie shakes Max to get his attention.

Charlie:
Oi! Listen!

Cut

Gabriella:
I cant believe me and Brad broke up, hes such a prick.
Sophie:
You know you can do so much better Gab so why do you care so much.
Gabriella:
I just wish i could meet my dream boy already.
Sophie:
And that is?
Gabriella:
I dunno, a boy that's fit obviously, good body, always smartly dressed...and...urm... with a cool hat of course!

Sophie Giggles and Gabriella laugh sarcastically.

Cut

They look over and can see that Charlie and Max and listening in.

Gabriella:
...and he has to come up to me and go "Alright sexy?" I then would want him to smile, wink, and say a really cheesy chat up line!

Sophie and Gabriella are still laughing.

Cut

Charlie and Max together

Charlie:
Did you hear all of that?
Max:
Ye, so? What's your point?
Charlie:
That if I change myself, I can make myself her ideal boy. See! I told you I do have a chance!

Dissolve

4. Int./Ext. - Montage
Charlie and Max in Max's room, looking for different clothes and hats to wear. He tries them on and keeps checking himself out in the mirror. He also tries different smiles to use, and practices his wink. They both practice chat-up lines whilst getting changed.

Max:
Ok, so let's practice some chat up lines. What you got?
Charlie:
I hope you know CPR, because you take my breath away
or Excuse me, but I think I dropped something!!! MY JAW!!

Max:
Do you work for Royal Mail? No? I could have sworn I saw you checking out my package.
Charlie:
You must be Jamaican, because Jamaican me crazy

Charlie looks into the mirror, turns to Max, and presents himself to him.

Charlie:
What about this?
Max:
Ye that should definitely work!

Fade to black

5. Ext.
Charlie walking down the street, dressed very nicely, looking very smug. He approaches Gabriella.

Charlie:
Alright sexy. Nice to meet you, I'm (your name) and you are...gorgeous!

OR

If I could rearrange the alphabet, I'd but U and I together...

Gabriella laughs, slaps Charlie and walks away.

Fade to black

6. Ext.

Next day Charlie comes back, back in his normal clothes. Gabriella spots Charlie and realizes how hard he tried to impress her. Charlie looks up at her. Gabriella smiles at Charlie and scene fades out.

Fade to black

New Idea - Smile

Group Meeting
We had a group meeting where we discussed our ideas and scenes. We came to the conclusion that there was just to many story strands to narrow down into a short 5 minute film. We then decided to take the basic idea of a boy trying to get a girl and take it into a new direction.

This is the scene list we came up with

Opening Scene:
Open to Charlie riding his bike to college.

Scene-1
Max and Charlie are sitting in a room; Charlie is staring out window at Gabriella. Mean whilst Max’s voice is in the background trying to have a conversation with him. Charlie zones out (Imagines him approaching Gabriella, dipping her and giving her a kiss). Max hits Charlie back to reality telling him to stop staring and that he could never get a girl like Gabriella.

Scene-2
Max and Charlie walk out room and are standing outside, they hear the girl telling her friend how her and her boyfriend just broke up, and starts to describe her perfect boy. Charlie and max over hear the conversation and Charlie begins to hatch his plan.
(smartly dressed, Good looking, nice body, cool hat, laid back personality, charming & most importantly an amazing smile and someone who makes her smile) – Ideal man

Scene-3 (Montage)
Charlie goes out to try and achieve the girls ideal man, with max’s help.

Scene-4
Charlie finally gets everything together, approaches girl with a cheesy chat up line dressed in the way she had described her ideal man. Girl laughs, rejects Charlie and walks away.

Scene-5
Next day Charlie comes back, back in his normal clothes. Girl spots Charlie and realizes how hard he tried to impress her. Gabriella smiles at Charlie and scene fades out.

We decided on the title Smile because the girls ideal guy is just someone who can make her smile and smiles at her too. We also felt it gave a warm feeling to the film and it was a nice simple title.

Characters
Charlie:
- Nerdy/geeky/unpopular
- Middle class
- Book smart

Max:
- Not as geeky as Charlie, but still geeky.
- Slightly more sociable
- Middle class

Gabriella:
- The girl Charlie admires
- Popular
- Beautiful

Sophie:
- Gabriella's best friend

Wednesday 13 October 2010

Stereotypes of Our Characters

Girlfriend


Geek


Smartly Dressed/Good Looking


Jock


In our film 'Smile' we have decided to stick with the conventional exaggerated stereotypes typical used in other films. This is to stick with our comical humour which is used throughout our film.

Monday 11 October 2010

Five Card Charlie

This was our first main idea for our short film:

Scene List
Scene 1. Int

Charlie being beaten up in a dark room by security

Scene 2. Ext
Charlie sitting outside, expensive car pulls up, Gabriella gets out car with boyfriend, kisses him goodbye and walks into collge.

Scene 3. Int
Charlie is in the library (doing maths homework) and staring at Gabriella. Max is sitting across the table and notices Charlie staring. Speeks to Charlie and tells him hell help him to get Gabriella in exchange for help in school looking at books and talking about the girl he has seen, Max tells him the only way he has a chance is by making money. They then spot a book “counting cards”
- Charlie helps with Max’s maths homework, in return for Max to teach him about girls.

Scene 4. Int
Fast forward cross cutting of Charlie learning how to count cards, then playing and then racking in chips - montage

Scene 5. Int
Charlie is playing a game of cards in a dark room, with 3 others, plus the dealer. voice over of him counting the cards, he’s then grabbed on the shoulder and voice over stops. He is taken into a room.

Scene 6. Int
Charlie being beaten up in a dark room by security (Scene 1)

Name
We came up with the title Five Card Charlie, by researching Blackjack slang and terms used in the game. We found these on Ildado.com. Five Card Charlie in blackjack terms is a blackjack rule variation where if you get 5 cards without busting, you win that hand. We picked this particular term out of all the others because we thought it had a good ring to it and we imagined it would be a catchy film title which related well with out film.

Characters
- Charlie: main character, nerd/geek, unconfident, lower/middle class, from London
- Max: Charlie’s best friend, not as geeky as Charlie, can still get girls
- Gabriella: girl Charlie admires

Monday 4 October 2010

‘The Writer’s Journey’

Because the film I want to create is similar to the film 21, I am going to write about how the book ‘The Writer’s Journey’ by Christopher Vogler examines a film, and how close the book is from the way 21 is told. This book is useful for help with the narrative, which is what I’m going to write about.


1. Ordinary World
- The opening of any story always has some special burdens to bear. It must hook the reader or viewer, set the tone of the story, suggest where it’s going, and get across a mass of information without slowing the pace.
Because so many stories are journeys that take heroes and audiences to Special Worlds, most begin by establishing the Ordinary World as a baseline for comparison. The Special World is only special if we can see how it contrasts to a mundane world of everyday affairs from which the hero issues forth. The Ordinary World is the context, home base, and background of the hero.

- In the film 21, we see that the ordinary world is a 20 year old boy, who has very little money, but enough, studying at college, getting the subway, having dinner with friends and his mum. The dad has died, and he is very intelligent and has a dream of going to Harvard University and getting a high doctors degree. Even though not many of the audience will be like this boy, a lot of the audience will be able to understand him. It also helps the audience understand him as a character, and his situation, with the help of a voiceover.

Throughout the whole opening, in any film, we always see different stages of this ordinary world. These stages include:
- introducing the hero to the audience
- identification
- the hero’s lack
- tragic flaws (not having enough money to go to Harvard)
- backstory and exposition

2. Call To Adventure
- The Ordinary World of most heroes is a static but unstable condition. The seeds of change and growth are planted, and it takes only a little new energy to germinate them. The call to adventure gets the story rolling. It often involves the temptation of something, which could fix the hero’s problem.

- In 21, the call to adventure is being asked to go to Las Vegas, with a serious amount of money, and count cards. Seeing as the student is a grade A maths genius, the teacher who asks him to join the team badly wants him to join it. The temptation of this is so that he can use the money from his winnings, to pay for Harvard.

- The different parts of this stage include:
- synchronicity
- temptation
- heralds of change
- reconnaissance
- disorientation and discomfort
- lack or need
- no more options
- warnings for tragic heroes
- more than one call: call waiting

3. Refusal of the Call
- The problem of the hero now becomes how to respond to the Call to Adventure. If you put yourself in the hero's shows, you can see that it’s a difficult passage. You’re being asked to say to a great unknown, to an adventure that will be exciting but also dangerous and even life-threatening. Theres an avoidance, different excuses, calls and positive refusals.

- In 21, when Ben has been asked to join the Blackjack team, although he would love the money, he would prefer to wait on the scholarship and concentrate on doing well via his school work.

- The different parts of this stage include:
- avoidance
- excuses
- persistent refusal leads to tragedy
- conflicting calls
- positive refusals
- artist as hero
- willing heroes
- threshold guardians
- the secret door

4. Meeting with the Mentor
- Sometimes it is not a bad idea to refuse a call until you’ve had time to prepare for the ‘unknown zone’ that lies ahead. In mythology and folklore that preparation might be done with the help of the wise, protective figure of the Mentor, whose many services to the hero include protecting, guiding, teaching, testing, training and Vladimir Propp calls this character type the ‘donor/provider’ because its precise function is to supply the hero with something needed on the journey. Meeting with the Mentor is the stage of the hero’s journey in which the hero gains the supplies, knowledge, and confidence needed to overcome fear and commence the adventure.

- In 21, the meeting with the mentor occurs when Ben decides to join the club, and goes into the secret classroom with Kevin Spacey and the other teammates. Here he learns how to count cards, and how to play the game properly.

The different parts of this stage include:
- heroes and mentors
- sources of wisdom
- mentors folklore and myth
- mentor himself
- avoiding mentor cliches
- misdirection
- mentor-hero conflicts
- mentor-driven stories
- mentor as evolved hero
- critical influence

5. Crossing the First Threshold
- Now the hero stands at the very threshold of the world of adventure, the Special World of Act Two. The call has been heard, doubts and fears have been expressed and allayed, and all due preparations have been made. But the real movement, the most critical action of Act One, still remains. Crossing the First Threshold is an act of the will in which the hero commits wholeheartedly to the adventure.

- In 21, this is again where we see Ben learning to count cards takes priority over his school work, and how he is eager to start winning big money.

- The different parts of this stage include:
- approaching the threshold
- threshold guardians
- the crossing
- rough landing

6. Tests, Allies, Enemies
Now the hero fully enters the mysterious, exciting Special World which Joseph Campbell called “a dream landscape of curiously fluid, ambiguous forms, where he must survive a succession of trials.” It’s a new and sometimes frightening experience for the hero. No matter how many schools he has been through, he’s a freshman all over the world.

The different parts of this stage include:
- contrast
- testing - test in the chinese restaurant where they play small blackjack
- allies and enemies
- sidekicks - helpers who help count the cards
- teams - the Blackjack team, and the cctv team
- the rival - head security guard
- new rules
- watering holes

7. Approach to the Inmost Cave
- Heroes, having made the adjustment to the Special World, now go on to seek its heart. They pass into an intermediate region between the border and the very center of the Hero’s journey. On the way they find another mysterious zone with its own Threshold Guardians, agendas, and tests. This is the approach to the inmost cave, where soon they will encounter the supreme wonder and terror. It’s time to make final preparations for the central ordeal of the adventure. Heroes at this point are like mountaineers who have raised themselves to a base jump by the labors of testing, and are about to make the final assault on the highest peak.

- In 21, this is when Ben takes it too far and trys to gamble his money, instead of beating the system and counting. He then wants to go on his own, with the rest of the team, instead of using the mentor.

- The different parts of this stage include:
- courtship
- the bold approach
- preparation for the ordeal
- obstacles
- beware of illusions
- warnings
- an impossible test
- higher steaks - gambling instead of counting
- get into your opponent’s mind - going alone without mentor
- breakthrough
- no exit - beaten up by security

8. Ordeal
- Now the hero stands in the deepest chamber of the inmost cave, facing the greatest challenge and the most fearsome opponent yet. This is the real heart of the matter, what Joseph Campbell called the Ordeal. It is the mainspring of the heroic form and they key to its magic power. With this, heroes must die so that they can be reborn.

- In 21, when the hero dies to be reborn (loosing all the money, getting beating up), he comes back as a bigger person, wanting to be part of a bigger team, and using the mentor again.

- The different parts of this stage include:
- death and rebirth
- change
- the crisis, not the climax
- placement of the ordeal
- points of tension
- witness to sacrifice
- a taste of death
- the elasticity of emotion
- hero appear to die
- hero witness death
- hero causes death
- facing the shadow
- death of a villain
- the villain escapes
- villains are heroes of their own stories - Ben is told how Kevin Spacey (mentor) was a great card counter
- heroes cheat death
- youth versus age
- death of the ego

9. Reward
- With the crisis of the ordeal passes, heroes now experience the consequences of surviving death. With the dragon that dwelt in the inmost cave slain or vanquished, they seize the sword of victory and lay claim to their reward. Triumph may be fleeting but for now they saviour its pleasures. Encountering death is a big event and it will surely have consequences. There will almost always be some period of time in which the hero is recognized or rewarded for having survived death or a great ordeal. A great many possibilities are generated by living through a crisis, and reward, the aftermath of the ordeal, has many shapes and purposes.

- The different parts of this stage include:
- celebration
- campfire scenes
- love scenes
- taking possession
- seizing the sword
- elixir theft
- initiation
- new perceptions
- seeing through deception
- self-realization
- epiphany
- distortions

10. The Road Back
- Once the lessons and rewards of the great ordeal have been celebrated and absorbed, heroes face a choice: whether to remain in the Special World or beging the journey home to the Ordinary World. Although the Special World may have its charms, few heroes elect to stay. Most take the road back, returning to the starting point or continuing on the journey to a totally new locale or ultimate destination.
This is the time when the story’s energy which maybe have ebbed a little in the quiet moments of seizing the sword, is now revved up again. If we look at the hero’s journey as a circle, with the beginning at the top, we are still down in the basement and it will take a long push to get us back up into the light.

- In 21, this is when Ben goes back to his hometown and has a ‘sorry’ talk with his friends, talks to his mum, and tries to take things much further with his teammates for his card counting.

- The different parts of this stage include:
- motivation
- retaliation
- chase scenes
- magic light
- villain escape
- setbacks

11. Resurrection
- Here comes one of the trickiest and most challenging passages for the hero and the writer. For a story to feel complete, the audience needs to experience an additional moment of death and rebirth, similar to the supreme ordeal but subtly different. This is the climax (not the crisis), the last and most dangerous meeting with death. Heroes have to undergo a final purging and purification before reentering the Ordinary World. Once more they must change. The trick for the writers is to show the change in their characters, by beaviour or appearance rather than by just talking about it. Writers must find ways to demonstrate that their heroes have been through a resurrection.

- In 21, this is when Ben trys to work together with his mates to try and get Kevin Spacey (the mentor) caught, so it is revenge.

- The different parts of this stage include:
- a new personality
- cleansing
- two great ordeals
- physical ordeal
- the active hero
- showdowns
- death and rebirth of tragic heroes
- choice
- climax
- character arc
- false claimant
- proof
- sacrifice
- incorporation
- change

12. Return with the Elixir
- Having survived all the ordeals, having lived through death, heroes return to their starting place, go home, or continue the journey. But they always proceed with a sense that they are commencing a new life, one that will be forever different because of the road just traveled. If they are true heroes, they return with the elixir from the Special World; bringing something to share with others, or something with the power to heal a wounded land.

- In 21, this is when Ben and the team-mates find a way to capture the mentor. They do this by allowing the mentor to be part of the group so they can share the winnings. After this, they get caught on cctv, he makes a run for it with the chips, but they end up being the wrong chips. However, Ben finds a way to beat of Kevin Spacey.

- The different parts of this stage include:
- return
- denouement
- two story forms
- the circular story form
- achievement of perfection
- the open-ended story form
- surprise
- reward and punishment
- the elixir of love
- he world is changed
- the elixir of responsibility
- the elixir of tragedy
- epilogue

Thursday 23 September 2010

Short Films That Go Into Consideration

Dealer - Part 2
For my AS media coursework, me and my fellow work partner Max created an opening title for our film 'Dealer'. As this piece of work received such good feedback, and got us A grades, we were thinking of doing a follow on, showing why the ace card was there. If we do this, at the beginning we will re-use some of last years footage with a title 'previously...' at the bottom.

One line - Gambling teenager knows people are out to kill him, seeing as he owes them money

Characters:
- Ryan
- Max
- Dami
- Didi
- Aimee Wright
- Craig/Jono as the man from behind

Beginning
-Starts with a chase scene of Ryan + Dami
- lasts for around 30 seconds
- high tempo music
- quick cuts
- Flashback which goes to Dealer - Part 1. Different bits of last years work which shows
- Ryan walking around, Max waiting, Ryan being given the box, and opening it to reveal the ace card.

Middle
- From the ace card being in the box, we have a dissolve which shows the ace of hearts.
-This card is lying on a desk, in a low-lit room, similar to an interrogation scene.
- We see a man from behind, with two girls either side. Max is sitting opposite this man, with a lot of shadow on the face.
- They are talking about how whoever receives the ace of spades, is the next to be killed
- Having this, people will then think that Dami is chasing Ryan so that he will kill him.
- Cuts back to quick cuts of the chase scene
- Ryan gets rugby tackled by Dami - cut straight to black so people think I have been attacked

End
- A flash back to a point of view shot of u driving your car, how u got a knife with u etc, and then u see me getting tackled right in front of the car, so you actually see that i’m being saved by him and not attacked.
- The audience know that Ryan has been saved
- NEED TO FIND AN ENDING WHICH IS GOOD




21 (remake)

One line - Gambling teenager gets caught counting cards

Story
A gambling teenager gets taught how to count cards, he then borrows money from a gangster, starts winning massively through counting, gets seen on cctv and a chase begins.



Vincent (remake)

One line - young boy thinks he is a famous singer/actor

- film, not animation
- narrative would be a modern day boy, who has a split personality, thinking he was someone else, completely out of the ordinary e.g. an 11 boy thinking he was Elton John, instead of someone more imaginable e.g. Elvis or Michael Jackson.
what could be good about doing this, would be if we make it a completely modern version, but only using the basic storyline; a boy who is clearly mucked up, and has got "two minds"

This short story was made using stop motion, by Tim Burton. He uses the similar style of this short film, throughout all of his future feature lengths, including; Nightmare Before Christmas, Edward Scissorhands and Sweeney Todd.
It is very gothic, and the use of Vincent Price's voice, (who is well known for having this deep voice, and also featured in the Michael Jackson song 'Thriller', helps create a spooky atmosphere. The story is of a young boy, Vincent, who pretends to be like the actor Vincent Price. He is obsessed with the tales of Edgar Allan Poe, who like Burton, was familiar with the gothic genre, but with poetry. The film ends with Vincent being tortured by the goings-on of his make-believe world, quoting "The Raven" (a poem by Edgar Allen Poe) as he falls to the floor in frailty, believing himself to be dead.




Scary/Suspense Film

One line - girl who is home alone, keeps seeing/thinking different things and people are around her

Story
A girl is home alone, making dinner, and she hears different sounds. She goes to the bathroom and sees writing on the wall (wipes her eyes and its gone), she then goes back down stairs and sees a knife in the lettuce. She looks into a mirror, sees a reflection with a man in a mask next to her, she turns around quickly and nothing is actually there.



Bo-Peep/Alice in Wonderland (remake)

One line - girl gets looser her friends and gets lost in a busy place, meets people a long the way who help solve different problems to help her get back

Story
- modern day version of Bo-peep, how she loses her sheep.
- the main character loses her friends in a modern place such as Oxford St
- is lost and is in a struggles to find them
- more twists and turns occur - similar to how Alice meets different people



Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

Story
- modern day version
- story similar to Vincent, how there is a narrator narrating a poem, but this time we could use a song lyric mixed in with the nursery rhyme.
- the story would be how a young boy/teenager, is aspiring to become a famous person (skateboarder/musician) but keeps failing, but he keeps going because he feels he can become that 'star'.
OR
extremely similar to Vincent, with a little boy thinking he is a ‘star’

- modern day remake would be Twinkle Twinkle Little Star. The story would be very similar to Vincent, how there is a narrator narrating a poem, but this time we could use a song lyric mixed in with the nursery ryhme. The story would be how a young boy/teenager, is aspiring to become a famous person (skateboarder/musician) but keeps failing, but he keeps going because he feels he can become that 'star'.
One line - young boy keeps trying to make it big, to become a star

Tuesday 21 September 2010

Favourite Directors


Favourite directors:

Charlie Chaplin - Modern Times, City Lights, The Gold Rush, The Circus
Tim Burton - Edward Scissorhands, Nightmare Before Christmas, Sweeney Todd
John Lasseter - Chief Animator at Pixar Studios - Toy Story
Orson Welles - Citizen Kane
Christopher Nolan - Batman: The Dark Knight
Charlie Chaplin
- Charlie Chaplin is one of my favourite film directors because at the time he was making his films, the technologies that we use now had not been invented then. This meant that he had to work with what he had available. Up until his film 'Modern Times' (1936), which is also my favourite Chaplin film, all of his were silent. Modern Times was also the first time the audience heard his voice in a film. This is because the character from the film, The Little Tramp, he had never been in a film where there was speech because it had not been invented yet, and because of this Chaplin did not want to ruin the character by making him speak. At the end of Modern Times is when we first here the tramp's character's voice, singing a song as a waiter.
Another reason why I admire Charlie Chaplin, is because not only did he direct his films, he also starred in them and wrote them, showing off his comedy skills. On top of writing, directing and acting, he also composed the music for most of his films. It was Modern Times when the instrumental of 'Smile' was first heard.

Tim Burton
- What I like about Tim Burton, is that all of his films are not normal. By 'not being normal', I mean they are nothing like reality. Tim Burton is my favourite director for many reasons. Firstly, I have grew up watching Nightmare Before Christmas, and Edward Scissorhands. Another reason is that Burton uses both real film, and also animation, which he started of doing at Disney. Another thing which I greatly admirer of Tim Burton is his use of collaborations, having continuously worked with actor Johnny Depp and music composer Danny Elfman. Films which Tim Burton has directed include Edward Scissorhands, Corpse Bride and Alice in Wonderland. He has also produced The Nightmare Before Christmas, which he also wrote. That film was directed by Henry Selick

(From Picture -2. While Danny Elfman is well known for composing music for most of Tim Burton's movies, he is credited in the above table for those movies in which he starred/sang in.)

John Lasseter
- an American animator, director and the chief creative officer at Pixar and Walt Disney Animation Studios. He is also currently the Principal Creative Advisor for Walt Disney Imagineering.
Having been an animator at Disney Studios, he was soon to become the Chief Creative Officer at Pixar Studios. Since becoming one of the biggest names in the animation world, he has created great films such as Toy Story, Cars and A Bug's Life

Christopher Nolan
- is a British-American film director, writer and producer. The films he has directed or produced which I like include Batman: The Dark Knight and Inception. What I like about his directing is that he manages to direct futuristic/non-real life films in such a good way, that it makes the viewers and audiences more involved with the characters, such as the Joker in Batman.

Friday 17 September 2010

Short Films

Here are four very different short films. The three are each from Future Shorts.

Fallen Art


This short film was directed by Tomek Baginski who is from Poland. It was made in 2005.
The story of the short film is that in an old forgotten military base far from civilization, a group of deranged military officers nurture their insanity, by using creating a stop-motion animation of the soldiers dancing,
This one again is made using animation. Although the story wasn't the greatest, and it almost made me want to find a different film to talk about, this one ended up being my favourite. I like how it is completely different to any other short film, or even feature film I have seen. The use of music grabs the audiences attention, how it started of with no music, with a man jumping off a plank, to then almost 'chicken music' when the artist is dancing along with his finished work.

The Black Hole



The Black Hole was made in 2008, by British directors 'Phil and Olly'.
The story is of a sleep-deprived office worker, who accidentally discovers a black hole, in a piece of paper. He then uses it to steal from a candy machine, and then greed gets the better of him when he tries to steal money from the office's safe.
If I were to put The Black Hole into a genre, it would have to be comedy. This is because it is funny at the end when they only character attempts to take his greed further. What I like about this short film is the use of colour and sound. The colour is very grey and blue, which is trying to make office life seem incredibly dull. The use of sound adds to the story, and to the dullness of the office; there is no music, just continued office noises such as photocopiers and scanners.

This Is Me


This Is Me was directed by Sam Arthur, from the UK, in 2006. The story is of a man in a coma, whilst his wife enjoys the high life, spending the money her husband sued for. Throughout the 4 minute short film, you get to witness the rise and fall of this couple living under the Heathrow airport flight path. The main incident in the film is when Bernie, the main character, is sitting in his garden, when something hits him.
What I like about this short film, is that it is in the style of a documentary. The main character is usually seen talking to the camera, describing the previous incident. The use of colour also stands out a lot in this short. When he is lying in the hospital bed, the room is blue and grey, where as when he is having his flashback, he is sitting outside, with bright yellow colours, like he was enjoying life back then, 2 years ago.

Thursday 16 September 2010

Terms

What is an 'auteur'?
- An auteur is filmmaker who has a personal style, such as gothic, and keeps thecreative control over his or her works. A good example of this is Tim Burton, who often uses the same style e.g. dark lighting, fantasy etc.

What is 'Cinema Verite'?
- Cinema verite is a movie that shows ordinary people being filmed in actual activities, without being controlled by a director. In other words, Cinema Verite is similar to reality tv/films. An example of this would be the film 'Paranormal Activity'. This is because it is a real movie, but shot in a documentary way.

What is 'avant-garde film'?
- Avant-gare film is an experimental film which descirbes a range of filmmaking styles, that are generally quite different from the practices of mainstream commercial and documentary filmmaking.

What is 'film noir'?
- Film noir is a used to describe stylish crime/thriller dramas, particularly those that emphasize cynical attitudes and sexual motivations. Film noir, meaning Black Film in french, gets its name from how it looks on screen, i.e. using low key lighting.
This video below is a perfect example of Film Noir.

What is 'French new wave' about?
- French new wave is a movement in French cinema in the 1960s that abandoned traditional narrative techniques in favor of greater use of symbolism and abstraction and dealt with themes of social alienation, psychopathology, and sexual love. It is of various new movements in cinema, especially one led by a group of experimental filmmakers.